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I'm hollowed to the marrow
Torn apart by this constant wind of emptiness,
My eyes seeking for the answer of a better tomorrow,
The malevolence of a disapearing bliss
Gripping the infinity of a starless night
Lost in a sphere of never ending torments
Riving the scale of an excruciating moroseness.

Struggle and despair you carry
Euphoria and passion you exult,
While I can share nothing but a gap
Attached to a breeze
Falling into nothingness
Fatigued by the time flowing
Hollowed to the marrow
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SoldiersWolf Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
excrutating/excruciating. Besides that this was pretty good.
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elgonzoonyx Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
Model, Actress, Writer...is there anything you can't do? This is a great poem.
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Stephanie-van-Rijn Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you :)
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MatthewOSullivan Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow Lady Stephanie another awesome poem. Love the words stuggle and despair. Keep up the excellent work.
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Stephanie-van-Rijn Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you so much :)
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PunkyJunky Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow
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Stephanie-van-Rijn Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
:)
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PunkyJunky Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good work
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foureyes Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
You have a way of mixing words and deliver some very powerful imagery,......."Torn apart by this constant wind of emptiness" :) I like it :heart:
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Stephanie-van-Rijn Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you so much!!
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genebou Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
Your poems are so dark! What's haunting you?
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monstar98277 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
Very nice.
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Stephanie-van-Rijn Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you :)
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monstar98277 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
You are very welcome. The way you use your words helps me to visualize what you are writing.
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Th3Joker Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Beautiful use of words once again, it's not often that you can actually feel as hollow as the poem describes by just reading, it's truly amazing the way you accomodate words together to induce a true feeling in the readers :)
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Stephanie-van-Rijn Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you so so much :)
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Pie-thief Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconclappingplz: Well done!
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Stephanie-van-Rijn Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you :)
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Pie-thief Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student General Artist
You are welcome. :iconheehee-plz:
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