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I'm hollowed to the marrow
Torn apart by this constant wind of emptiness,
My eyes seeking for the answer of a better tomorrow,
The malevolence of a disapearing bliss
Gripping the infinity of a starless night
Lost in a sphere of never ending torments
Riving the scale of an excruciating moroseness.

Struggle and despair you carry
Euphoria and passion you exult,
While I can share nothing but a gap
Attached to a breeze
Falling into nothingness
Fatigued by the time flowing
Hollowed to the marrow
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SoldiersWolf Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
excrutating/excruciating. Besides that this was pretty good.
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elgonzoonyx Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
Model, Actress, Writer...is there anything you can't do? This is a great poem.
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Stephanie-van-Rijn Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you :)
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MatthewOSullivan Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow Lady Stephanie another awesome poem. Love the words stuggle and despair. Keep up the excellent work.
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Stephanie-van-Rijn Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you so much :)
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PunkyJunky Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow
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Stephanie-van-Rijn Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
:)
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PunkyJunky Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good work
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foureyes Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
You have a way of mixing words and deliver some very powerful imagery,......."Torn apart by this constant wind of emptiness" :) I like it :heart:
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Stephanie-van-Rijn Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
thank you so much!!
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